http://equinaut.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] equinaut.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] shiro_ki 2009-10-28 10:23 pm (UTC)

Можно понять, но оттенок будет другой. Акцент тогда смещается на вторую строку, это не вполне соответствует оригиналу, в первой строке есть зацепка "just" и, видимо, "tik".
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